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DBSK - Hidden Wings (Yunho x OFC) 
28th-Mar-2009 08:23 pm
KAT-TUN//Akanishi Jin - adorkable
Title: Hidden Wings
Author:: angel_9_lives
Rating: PG?
Genre: fluff, romance
Pairing: Jae-centric, but Yunho/ofc

From Jaejoong's point of view.

They don't see her the way Jaejoong does. Maybe if they did, they would love her as much as he does.

They were friends. That was it. No matter what the throngs of yaoi fangirls thought, they were never more than that. Never wanted to be more than that.

Jaejoong had his own wants from life just as Yunho did, and none of them included the other naked and panting beneath - or over - their body.

Maybe that was why none of them understood how he could laugh and love the woman-child sprawled on the couch with her head pillowed on Yunho's lap, and legs stretching over Yoochun's to tickle Junsu's side with a pink socked foot.

They never saw the way the weight from being the "leader" would just melt away from Yunho's shoulders at the mere mention of her name (or the way her eyes lit up at the sound of his voice).

They never saw the way Changmin would sacrifice the last piece of pizza because she allowed a hint of a pout to reach her eyes (or the way she would disappear into the kitchen and come back with it cut in half to share).

They never saw the way Junsu would slow his hell bent pace of eating to let her laughingly brush away the grain of rice stuck to his chin (or the way she was the only one that laughed at his jokes, and always invited him to bring Junho so he wouldn't have to be satisfied with just gaming together).

They never saw the way Yoochun would quickly try to hide the cigarette when she would join him on the balcony (or the way she just smiled and handed him a silver lighter monogrammed with a cricket on one side and the words 'Strength through perseverance' on the other, then pointed to the ashtray he hadn't noticed. A one armed hug, and she disappeared back inside the house. He would turn the lighter over in his hands, thinking of the words and the ashtray that he knew she didn't use, then tuck it into his pocket and follow her back to the living room where everyone else was. The rest of the pack broken in half and the tobacco scattered to the winds).

They never saw the way she always secretly doubled the order of Changmin's favorite dish when they ordered takeout on the nights no one wanted to cook. The way that she had a separate computer set up with the latest gaming technology for the times when Junho couldn't take a break from filming to come with his brother. The way Yoochun had cut down to smoking only a pack-a-week, instead of the two packs-a-day he had been at the year before she came into their life. The way she always made sure to have dinner ready for them their first night in town so Jaejoong wouldn't have to cook when all he wanted to do was sleep.

No, they never saw her the way Jaejoong did.

'But maybe that's ok,' he thought, watching as Junsu squealed with his usual eu-kyang-kyang laugh, and struggle to get away from her tickling foot. His struggles ended when Changmin plopped himself down on the older boy's lap. Then she sat up, leaning in to tickle the dolphin-boy with her fingers instead, and Jaejoong smiled as pure white wings unfurled from her back, spreading out to cocoon them all in their warmth. 'She never sees herself the way I do either.'

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29th-Mar-2009 02:03 am (UTC)
That was beautiful. Thank you.
29th-Mar-2009 02:12 am (UTC)

ty~ :D

29th-Mar-2009 02:15 am (UTC)
aaa~ I studied and I know who they are now! w00t! You should be proud. :D

29th-Mar-2009 02:16 am (UTC)
rofl, dork!Jinru again~

29th-Mar-2009 02:17 am (UTC)

i swear, i don't usually read het, but i loved this.
absolutely loved this.
29th-Mar-2009 02:19 am (UTC)
*flails a lil*


*runs away blushing*

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29th-Mar-2009 04:41 am (UTC)
^_^////// ty~

29th-Mar-2009 05:26 am (UTC)

i still love how she's yunho's lover and its in jae's POV. wheeee~

29th-Mar-2009 07:22 am (UTC)
lol, I thought about doing it in segments with each of them saying something about how they see her, but I figured this was better~

29th-Mar-2009 06:02 pm (UTC)
Really nicely written :)
Short and sweet - just the way I like it.
29th-Mar-2009 06:07 pm (UTC)
thank you:)

31st-Mar-2009 09:29 am (UTC)
this is just...beautiful..the points of view, the italics..everything..
31st-Mar-2009 11:20 pm (UTC)
ack, your comment just made me realize I missed a part that was supposed to be in italics, lol.

thank you:) I'm glad you liked it <3

1st-Apr-2009 03:40 am (UTC)
XD so awesome...=3
1st-Apr-2009 04:16 am (UTC)


1st-Apr-2009 03:45 am (UTC)
This was absolutely lovely. I love how it all flowed together. I really enjoy your style of writing. And it was so cute and so happy. Although I how simple it was, I kind of wish there was more. But anyway, I really, really enjoyed this.
1st-Apr-2009 04:19 am (UTC)
I didn't think there'd be that many people interested in the fic, much less people wanting more, heh. maybe I'll write more on it sometime~

ty <3

1st-Apr-2009 04:25 am (UTC)
haha, you're welcome. I think it's perfect as is, so don't trouble yourself over adding more too much.
2nd-Apr-2009 01:46 pm (UTC)
Beautiful. There's no other word for it. So simple, and yet, you can feel the affection in their actions and those descriptions from Jae's POV. Please write more DBSK het soon! Haha.
2nd-Apr-2009 06:39 pm (UTC)
lol, I may have to XD;; I wasn't expecting people to like it, so I hadn't made any plans on writing more, buuuuuuuuuut....^_^;;

tysm for the comment <3

13th-Apr-2009 03:01 pm (UTC)
i love it!!!!! love it love it. thanks for sharing. ♥
13th-Apr-2009 09:24 pm (UTC)
ty hon <3 I'm glad you liked it~

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